Thanks for stopping by, and welcome back for another six sentences. If you missed the previous six sentences from my YA urban fantasy, Reaper's Novice, and would like to catch up, please click HERE and the second part HERE.
Today I'll post the next six from the dinner scene:
Not when they look like two fighters in
a ring about to charge at each other.
My gaze shifts to Anton, his shoulders
hunched, as if to ward off the words cracking the air like a whip. I look to
Lucy next, her tiny shoulders trembling as she lifts a small, slender hand and
wipes her nose.
Mom’s voice bursts from her lips like bullets
in a quiet forest, jerking my attention back to her and Dad. “You should have
told me. You didn’t bother because you don’t respect me. My decisions.” Her sky
blue eyes flash at Dad, her cheeks flushed.
Feedback/Comments are ALWAYS welcome. Anyone up for meteor showers watching tonight? Here in Vienna should be around midnight.
Have a meteorlicious Sunday
Have a meteorlicious Sunday
Another great six. I can feel the strain and tension at this table. It has me looking forward to the next six...
ReplyDeleteOhh the tension is so there..Great 6
ReplyDeleteOh, Cecelia! Your turn of phrase is amazing. This is a fascinating and descriptive scene and very well written! Emotional six!
ReplyDeleteIf it's something in the drinking water that allows you write awesome sentences like that, it's time for me to relocate. Great Stuff! ;)
ReplyDeleteManicScribbler,
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
Savannah,
Thanks!
Silver James,
Thank you for the kind words. :)
Kevis
LOL.. thanks. You are welcometo Vienna anytime. :)
Wow, great power in these descriptors! You've painted this scene masterfully - well done!
ReplyDeleteSome Dark Romantic